Living in a country where you to speak a foreign language, can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.
To what what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
I am a working lady and work at Saudi Arabia. Before applying this job I was felling happy to get a chance residing in Saudi Arabia because being a Muslim, I have a opportunity to visit Holy places like Makkah and Madina. So, when I have get this job and shifted in Saudi Arabia , I have face many problems like cultural, social and language.
Locals of Saudi Arabia are very friendly and give a warm welcome to internationals who is coming to other contries as a tourists or workers, employees etc. My initial days in office are pleasant but passage of time, I feel lonely and quit, due to language bearer. The locals of Saudia always speake their local language like Arabic, but I have no grift on Arabic, due to this I cannot talk to locals in free time to build freiendship. Locals of Saudi Arabia never change this habbit of speaking local language in other countries. Even, Saudi Govt officials visits the Pakistan and other country, they deliver their speeches in Arabic not in Englosh or other languages.
Due to such language bearer, I have face practical problem to learning, question and answers and explanations. I respect the locals of Saudi Arabia for promoting their culture and how consist on their principles or conventions or customs. But I have feel bad for international, who are working in Saudia and students etc, they cannot speak in Arabic and face many hurdles in staring time. So, Saudia want to adopt English as a official language and due to this no one in trouble when he want to travel in Saudia or work in Saudi Arabia.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...i Arabia because being a Muslim, I have a opportunity to visit Holy places like M...
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Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...like Makkah and Madina. So, when I have get this job and shifted in Saudi Arabia ,...
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Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I have get this job and shifted in Saudi Arabia , I have face many problems like ...
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Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...et this job and shifted in Saudi Arabia , I have face many problems like cultural...
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Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...b and shifted in Saudi Arabia , I have face many problems like cultural, social and...
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Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ultural, social and language. Locals of Saudi Arabia are very friendly and give ...
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Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a tourist' or simply 'tourists'?
Suggestion: a tourist; tourists
...nals who is coming to other contries as a tourists or workers, employees etc. My initial d...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...me. So, Saudia want to adopt English as a official language and due to this no on...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...d due to this no one in trouble when he want to travel in Saudia or work in Saudi Ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65090909091 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52775758155 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527272727273 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7829579919 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.583333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0618388760843 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285436285755 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350703436847 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0453833913261 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126914617518 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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