Long distance flights use more fuel than cars and pollute the environment. We should discourage non-essential flights instead of limiting the use of the car.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Along with the advanced technology is fume, smog and the exhaustion of natural resources. However, whether plane or car using exacerbate these environmental problems is a contentious issue. This essay will elaborate and give some plausible explanations why I somewhat concur with these stances.
On the one hand, aviation is one of the industries which consume fuel and release toxic smock most. This is not only because each flight require huge amount of fossil fuel to be operated but flight networks are extremely dense and complex as well. To illustrate, in Vietnam, there are more than fifty plane trips per day despite the fact that it is just a developing nation. Furthermore, these day, numerous private air journey has operated by elites that can trigger global pollution, thereby curbing these unnecessary trips is paramount for a fresher atmosphere.
On the other hand, the restriction of car using is also an indispensable concrete action to eliminate air contamination. While public transportation instigations are common and convenient, a lot of people, especially metropolitan dwellers still opt to use individual car for their daily life. If the authorities only reduce unimportant plane trips without limiting personal vehicle usages, mankind will unable to eradicate the intensify of the resources insufficiency as well as pollution predicament.
In conclusion, in order to protect our environment and save the fuel resources, we all have to eliminate both unessential air and car trips.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
... just a developing nation. Furthermore, these day, numerous private air journey has opera...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...sages, mankind will unable to eradicate the intensify of the resources insufficiency as well ...
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Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...nable to eradicate the intensify of the resources insufficiency as well as pollution pred...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rotect our environment and save the fuel resources, we all have to eliminate both...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44680851064 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05982598913 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.706382978723 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7674484879 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.363636364 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189807044752 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607174167332 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486319044842 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101540300738 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280615422459 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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