Art is a form of expressing emotions or creativity. There are various forms of art such as performance art (Films, theatre) Literary Arts (Classics, literature) and Pictorial Art (Paintings, Sculptures) to name a few. Art depicts the cultural heritage and traditions of a country. It is true that, the present generation tends to value science, technology and business over arts.
Success, in the present day, is measured in terms of the monetary benefits and luxuries available. It is an undeniable fact that artists survive on a low income, until they achieve recognition, and an art takes up a huge amount of time to be completed. For instance, I have a friend, who is a struggling artist at the moment, and she lives in a small one room studio apartment to make ends meet. Moreover, Globalization has led people to believe that the future of the world is in the hands of science and technology. These two reasons, in my opinion, are the causes for lack of interest in the present generation towards art.
People need to be made aware of the rich culture which art attempts to project. Government should provide relief to artists and encourage young artists to exhibit their work by opening exhibitions free of cost. Schools should conduct competitions such as painting, theatre, dance, etc., to spark the interests of the students. Workshops in theatre as well as painting should be conducted to encourage young minds. Parents should take children to exhibitions and also inspire children to follow their passion and dreams.
In Conclusion, various measures should be taken by the government to encourage artists and by parents to imbibe the importance of arts in young minds, only then can we preserve the heritage and culture of various countries in the world.
- The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period. 61
- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs including uses for food and research Discu 83
- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary 84
- The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005 67
- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? 61
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.302114803625 0.247107183377 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.14501510574 0.155533422707 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0755287009063 0.0946595960268 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0211480362538 0.0501214627716 42% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0271903323263 0.0437548338989 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114803625378 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0271903323263 0.0403226058552 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79073033659 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0453172205438 0.0326793684256 139% => OK
Particles: 0.00302114803625 0.00163938923432 184% => OK
Determiners: 0.0845921450151 0.0861772015684 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0181268882175 0.021408717616 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00604229607251 0.011925033212 51% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1771.0 1933.35771543 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00338983051 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.389830508475 0.374742101984 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.322033898305 0.28420135186 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.210169491525 0.203846283523 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128813559322 0.137316102897 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79073033659 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 64.7366486674 60.7387585426 107% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6666666667 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1522618019 49.517814964 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.066666667 127.492653851 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.814263465372 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 51.8700564972 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 2.296875 1.69124875643 136% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403783678833 0.332605444948 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105455758346 0.102741220458 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0619042400559 0.0668466124924 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.562906503296 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141275967752 0.148594505496 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166223457314 0.134430193775 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759718070068 0.0742795772207 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.349460816174 0.324371583561 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0537745513709 0.0638462369009 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277322514502 0.228012699653 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649584883983 0.058150111329 112% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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