The continuous and steady growth of international tourism has generated greater profits than ever for those countries which have a great number of visitors. This can be seen as a positive development for the country's economical figures. However, I think that it can also be devastating if tourism is not managed properly. In this essay, I will discuss some of the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern societies.
Let us start by looking at how tourism can be a major source of income. First of all, visitors coming from various countries may bring with them money to inject into the local economy. As we might have known, some countries which are well-known for its tourism industry, such as Thailand, receive a great number of people coming into its land in every peak season. Moreover, tourism can save the historical buildings from dying out and being forgotten. While going sightseeing or visiting a famous tourism location costs some expense for the visitors, this amount will be contributed to the fixtures and refurbishing of those downgraded buildings in order to welcome the next incoming guests.
On the other hand, tourism can adversely affect the local people's lives. The vociferous minority are tend to be troublesome because of the increasing amount with greater frequency of garbage they left behind. Some of them may even show destructive behaviors which are completely inappropriate with the local's cultural values. In Thailand, government has reported many serious cases of binge drinking visitors who exhibited undesirable behaviors, causing unpleasantness to the local people who prefer to live peacefully without disruption from the outside world.
In conclusion, there are both positive and negative impacts on the hospitable countries. Personally, I think that it is the best if the government can find the balance between the preservation the local's cultures and customs and simultaneously making some profits from tourism, boosting the country's economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36507936508 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88802708234 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8202578879 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251105641529 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935935087349 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08898875911 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147175903549 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708574990827 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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