It is a fact that, in today's developed technology world, more and more difficult problems that young people have to cope with. This essay will highlight some of main issues and offer appropriate solutions for each problem.
One of the most serious problems young people face is the high unemployment rate. With the modernity and advantages of technology, more and more young people tend to move to live in big cities, which forces companies to increase their recruitment requirements. And this is a disadvantage for young people without an impressive backgroud, they will find it difficult to compete with those with high expertise. As a result, many young people are stressed with financial problems when they do not have a stable job nor have enough money to pay for living and travel expenses.Moreover, when coped with these problems, young people will be under great pressure, which makes them always in a state of stress and spend a lot of time on working to gain high productivity. As a result, they will lack relaxation and connection with family and people around.
Nevertheless, there are some viable remedies to solve or at least alleviate those issues.First of all, each young person himself needs to clearly define his or her study or work goals, improve their own knowledge to improve their education, which will benefit you in the future job application process. Besides, parents and relatives need to pay more attention to their children, take responsibility for their behavior, and train them from an early age to avoid being entangled in social evils later on. In addition, governments and leaders can have ability to raise awareness of young people to penetrate how serious social evils are and teach them how to balance between work and life.
In conclusion, although living in big cities creates many obstacles for young people, the simultaneous coordination between the government, families and even young people themselves can somewhat reduce these problems,has been proven their feasibilities
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Suggestion: Moreover
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Suggestion: First
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...elves can somewhat reduce these problems,has been proven their feasibilities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, at least, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17431192661 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83223357226 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587155963303 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7904423581 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.818181818 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7272727273 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278486139634 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106675695033 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04586669575 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164497497896 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039150674536 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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