It is true that the rapid industrialization of major cities in the world triggers some obstacles for young people who live here. This essay will highlight some main problems of this and propose several viable approaches to mitigate the adverse effects of this phenomenon.
To begin with, the migration of young people from rural to urban areas is one of the main causes. Living in a growing city, in other words, young residents are likely to survive in a competition, in which they have to compete with each other to land a decent job. For that reason, with less impressive education backgrounds, a plethora of young generations are out of work. Paradoxically, the high cost of living in big cities has placed a heavy financial burden on young citizens whose salaries are not adequate to cover all of their living expenses including food and services, accommodation and this may put them at a higher risk of mental health problems such as stress, depression. Another issue is that living in big cities increases people's chances of suffering from social evil. Without the control of adults, young people are like to get engaged in recreational activities including bars, pubs and illicit acts such as using drugs, violence, fraud, smuggling, and teen pregnancy.
Nevertheless, there are a number of actions that could be taken to address the issue. One solution to the high unemployment rate would be for governments to provide education and vocational training for young people so that they are well-equipped with the knowledge and skills needed to find a good job and earn a steady income. Furthermore, parents should pay more attention to their children in order to prevent them from developing mental illnesses.
In conclusion, although there are some unavoidable issues such as unemployment and mental illnesses as a result of overcrowding in central cities.
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- Students learn far more with their teachers than other sources Internet or television To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, may, nevertheless, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12091503268 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8793594492 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604575163399 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5128647808 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.583333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26613846241 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815682878225 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066018547427 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132610244447 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741494904065 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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