There is no doubt mostly youngesters play sports to maintain their body. The question is firms organise sports function to increase their bussines sales but few people believed this has a bad impact on sports because some organisation promote negative product such as drugs and alochal. I partially agreewith this and i would elobrate in the subsequent paragraphs.
To embark with, why negative impact on sports when large firms use sports event to promote their products the first and foremost is bad product revealed by advertising. To make it more clear, when businessmen use sports function to increase their sales but sometimes if the product is bad like drugs so, sportsmen influence to product that can be harmful for sports. For instance, in USA a even is organized by agency and authority obtain that 100 athlets gained bad habbit because of events. Hence, gymnast might have to help their promoters which badly affect their physical condition.
On the other hand, it has also postive effect on sports the major one is increase popularity of sports. In other words, many individuals watching event because the event motivate the masses to play sports and people gain knowledge about games. Moreover, their interest is increase in sports. A survey was conducted in UK and obtain that 90% individuals have keen interest in sports due to sports event. As a result, sports gaining attraction by the sports event.
In conclusion, although it has some negative impact on sports such as companies advertising bad products that is harmful for individuals yet the postive impact like games gained lot of popularity because of events it also can not be neglected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10218978102 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59636585817 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525547445255 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5174878582 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.538461538 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389003546376 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144863257799 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917298575834 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237052301887 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419006815818 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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