Majority of wild animals have been under the risk of extinction and remains are not safe too.
Majority of wild animals have been under the risk of extinction and remains are not safe too. It is occurring due to desire of human for devoloping cities with constructing buildings and making materials, including shoes and clothes, from their skins. It can be tackled with two main measures.
One of the chief causes why wild animals are struggling to survive is deforestation. In other words, most people, planning to destroy forests in order to transform there to urban areas for people who search of apartments from City centers. As a result, animals are never considered as the main component. This brings us to our second reason: products from animal's skins. Now people are ready to waste their all percentage of money with the desire of wearing which clothes are made by skins of animals particularly, like , crocodile. These products are sold to the rich by illegal hunters who is being the main reason for extinction of wild animals.
Hopefully, we can prevent this with several campaigns with adding volunteers and it should be named " wild animals must be out main part " it is really helpful by ordinary people who report to the government to led animals live. As a result, the extinction of animals might have declines day by day. Moreover, TV shows , related to save wildlife, are useful (and probably better than first solution) for prevention to risk of animals with sharing ideas and informations for watchers ( humans) how animals are valuable part of our life. In addition to this, these ways are benefit without any doubt because the ways are formal and informal which means we might have two options to solve it.
In conclusion, urbanization and materials of skins are the major factors for this trouble, campaigns and shows are the most productive solutions of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, really, second, so, as for, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96688741722 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5867815354 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572847682119 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0284002902 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29712381746 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125859761976 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.246681664069 0.0667982634062 369% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181870316643 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139903990531 0.056905535591 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.