Many animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?
In this day and age,we are living in a world where environment degradation is a heated topic and often discussed. It is obviously apparent that a range of endangered animal species are on the brink of extinction caused by humanity industrialization and natural resources exploitation both on land and under the sea. While this trend could be caused from several reasons, a number of viable solutions could be adopted to tackle them.
There are numerous reasons that could lead to this pressing trouble, but I believe the roof cause is that the global population explosion which has not only negative impacts on animals, but also a vast of huge demerits to the environment. It is clearly obvious that the more human population experiences a rise, the more land they need to inhabit and human has no choice except demolishing thousands to thousands hectare of jungle where is natural habitat of the major portion of animals. In addition, population boom also seem to put a huge pressure on food supplying together with other life standard qualities which has encouraged to overfish and intensively hunt due to huge demand for several tasty dishes in the restaurants or even animal fur coats for fashionistas. These process finally causes the global environment degradation.
Given the aforementioned reasons, it is highly recommended that several remedies should be implemented to alleviate the problem. One of the effective solutions could be to introduce family planning in all the world to assure that we could control the roof cause of this challenge. China perfectly exemplifies this situation when their government had succeeded to introduce the only child law since 1990 due to the fact that the environment in this country was so devastating and many species was on the brink of extinct because of its huge population. Til now, with a lot of action on environment and animal preservation, many research represent that over a third of land in this country is now occupied by jungle again.
In conclusion, the danger of wildlife on land or in sea stems from irresponsible activities of people, and several measures need to be done to mitigate its adverse effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
In this day and age,we are living in a world where environment...
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Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
... humanity industrialization and natural resources exploitation both on land and under the...
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Line 5, column 623, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much research', 'a good deal of research'.
Suggestion: much research; a good deal of research
...on environment and animal preservation, many research represent that over a third of land in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, third, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08100558659 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91796244889 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561452513966 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4986946405 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.583333333 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210689763387 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647390972805 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671656023399 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120032430313 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271692404392 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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