Many animals are being hunted to the brink of extinction in order to fulfil the demand and greed of mankind for decorative purposes as well as for other reasons, such as traditional medicine.
How can this issue be tackled?
one of the conspicuous trend of today's world is to see that there are many animals are killed by human which are on the verge of the extinction because people use the animals to produce fashionable products and conventional medicine. there are wide range of factors that accounts for why this is happening. In my opinion, the situation can be remedied provided some effective measures are taken.
there are myriad of solution for this soaring concerns. The most preponderant one is that nowadays the enormous amount of animals are killed in factory farming for fulfilling the needs of human being and they used them for making a leather jackets, wallet, shoes etc. Moreover, some animals are used by medical companies for making medicines. To restrict this, the government could introduce law to against people who poach animals for their luxury goods. For example, in South Africa, there was serious hunting issue in 2010 and the government has implemented such laws that if anyone is found guilty, he or she will be strictly punished as well as heavily penalized. As a result, 70% of the poaching animals by human being declined as compared to precious couple of decades.
Another prominent solution is that the government should start advertising campaigns to raise public awareness to protect the natural areas and wild animals. Besides, the government should declare forest areas as national parks and also activate the rules and regulations to protect the fauna. For instance, according to Albert Einstein, if honey bees disappear from earth, human would be dead in four years, approximately one third of our food depends on insect pollination majorly done by honey bees.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that in this issue government is not only responsible for the protection of wild animals, masses also take a responsibility to save environment.
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- Many animals are being hunted to the brink of extinction in order to fulfil the demand and greed of mankind for decorative purposes as well as for other reasons, such as traditional medicine. How can this issue be tackled? 84
- Many animals are being hunted to the brink of extinction in order to fulfil the demands and greed of mankind for decorative purposes as well as for other reason such as traditional medicine. How can this issue be tackled? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, third, well, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12987012987 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69913398216 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9383236555 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.538461538 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285752765933 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948486178693 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486006747628 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153293167664 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869310642076 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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