The topic of vaccinations is widely discussed but yields no conclusion otherwise. Some supporters probably say that these artificial inductions of immunity should be a regulation, while some critics probably claim that these inoculations should be a voluntary decision of the parents. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the idea of the critics because I believe that the disadvantages of vaccinations surpass their benefits within 2 particular reasons as follows:
One of my significant reasons is that some risks are involved because that injections questionable vaccine ingredients into a child may cause side effects like a problem from getting IPV (inactivated poliovirus vaccine) by a severe allergic reaction. Such reactions from a vaccine are occasional, estimated at approximate 1 in a million does, and would happen within a few minutes to a few hours after the vaccination.
another fundament reason is that these chemicals inside perhaps lead to a more severely ill effect like a premature ovarian failure by taken polysorbate80, an emulsifier used in some foods and cosmetics, in that it may cause adverse reproductive effects and cancer based on animal testing data. Also, there is no safety testing has been done in humans. Hence, the intake of harmful chemicals would cause health problems in the long term. Monosodium glutamate (MSG), for example, may cause over-stimulate neuron receptors in the brain, causing to die.
In conclusion, although vaccination presents minor benefits, they pore tremendous drawbacks as aforementioned. So, I would support the idea to not vaccinate and suggest that the vaccinations should be a voluntary decision of the parents and distribute awareness of vaccinations’ danger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...o a few hours after the vaccination. another fundament reason is that these chemical...
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Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dieing', 'dying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: dieing; dying
... neuron receptors in the brain, causing to die. In conclusion, although vaccination...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50936329588 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20594875535 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644194756554 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.731536032 49.4020404114 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.1 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0830057439122 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0271003589283 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370001423962 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0508216501855 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412420805262 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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