In today's world, a lot of human beings are tend to live in huge flats. I will discuss both point of view in further paragraphs.
To begin with the fact that, most of humans are shifting from rural to urban area. For that reason, construction of apartment
is rapidly increasing and large amount of people shifting in home unit.The first and fore most benefit is cost effectiveness. People can purchase it easily compare to private houses.In addition to that, it seems more safer option in contrast of live alone, due to , in home units there are more surroundings are available. Moreover, people can enjoy company of more neighbours. Another main thing people consider is maintenance. Regularly maintenance is mandatory, but in this case it is divided by each blocks which is more convenient option. Furthermore, people who live above from ground floor not only take profit of natural fresh air, top view of city but also protect their family from insects, noise, odour, and ground pollution. For instance, on ground such as common passage and road. It is surrounded by dustbins, drainage line, traffic, et cetera.
In contrast, others think house is private property with land. People thinks in private property they can hold occasions without any constraint. Moreover, children's physical skill is also develop effectively. To take, an example, children who live in apartment are virtually occupied and spend more time with their peers whereas, children live in private houses are more physically active in their leisure time.
To conclude, different individual have different priorities. However, accommodation of apartment is fruitful in current era.
- In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks.Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages or more disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 73
- Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...todays world, a lot of human beings are tend to live in huge flats. I will discuss b...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the humans') or simply say ''most humans''.
Suggestion: most of the humans; most humans
...graphs. To begin with the fact that, most of humans are shifting from rural to urban area. ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... amount of people shifting in home unit.The first and fore most benefit is cost eff...
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Message: Did you mean 'compares'?
Suggestion: compares
...tiveness. People can purchase it easily compare to private houses.In addition to that, ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ase it easily compare to private houses.In addition to that, it seems more safer o...
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Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...te houses.In addition to that, it seems more safer option in contrast of live alone, due t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...option in contrast of live alone, due to , in home units there are more surroundin...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and road. It is surrounded by dustbins, drainage line, traffic, et cetera. In...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
...eover, childrens physical skill is also develop effectively. To take, an example, child...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27547169811 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7207346379 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656603773585 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.1634077628 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2352941176 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222679463806 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561662540697 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434288763666 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10161539197 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475940310158 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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