Many companies are moving to the countryside instead of staying in large cities. What are the advantages of this trend?
It's obvious that the majority of big companies work beyond national borders. Company profit growth is important, but I believe that corporations have social responsibilities in the communities where they do business.
Production practices have resulted in significant environmental concerns from an environmental perspective. Weak environmental regulation has resulted in pollution of waterways, which in turn has resulted in soil erosion. As a result, businesses should commit money to the installation of waste treatment facilities to deal with industrial wastes prior to dumping them into the ocean
From a social perspective, there are a few reasons why businesses should have public obligations. In the first place, firms might attract a better educated and talented staff if they improve working conditions and provide benefits like sick leave and incentives. Skilled workers, on the other hand, are more adaptable since they can quickly satisfy job needs and switch from one activity to another. Furthermore, in nations like the United States or China, certain conditions must be avoided, such as pay poverty, bad working conditions, and child marriage. The second factor is site. Multinational corporations, for example, support individuals in need while also enhancing their public image by participating in charitable activities likes donating to charities or offering scholarships. As a result, this may help boost their revenue.
Finally, multinational corporations have both a moral and self-interested need to take on public obligations in the nations where they operate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, while, for example, such as, as a result, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73728813559 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23856350776 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707627118644 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8808779475 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.833333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0271314767151 0.244688304435 11% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0125241716396 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0220013609467 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0189641967116 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255795084784 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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