Many companies invest their money in sport games for advertisement purposes. Some people think it is good for the sport world, while others believe that it has some disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The shocking phenomenon of investment of money in to sports advertisement recently comes to the forefront. Some feel that it will have an adverse effect on the sports word. However, I agree with those who say that this will help sports word in acquiring new talent along with new techniques for practice. In the following paragraphs, I will explore the rationale for both beliefs as well as proffer my own rationale for a viewpoint on this matter.
Regarding those who feel that investing in to sports advertisement will be of no use; there exists valid reason the main justification is that players get attracted toward money and practice less for the sports. The Alaska reported just last week that sports players of Alaska who got sponsor get less time for practice as they get involve in to some other kind of business.
Nevertheless, I cannot hold the opinion in good conscience because of the fact that individual who got sponsor become motivated and practice well and their chances of winning get increased. The Harvard reported those Asian citizens, who got sponsor they got help in acquiring new techniques and now they get hold of the game. That same Harvard report mentioned that with the initiative of many companies team those are always consider underdog are now the biggest winners.
In sum, if everyone put a moratorium on a belief that investing money in sports game for advertisement purpose and pitches in like normal people others and I can bring change. I hope that soon everyone understands how this helps sports players and turn up the game.
- You have lost an important document recently. Write to your manager regarding this and say– What is the document?– How and when did it happen?– What did you do regarding this matter? 78
- Children usually want to play the same games and watch the same TV programs as their friends. Should parents allow it or not? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience. 73
- Children usually want to play the same games and watch the same TV programs as their friends. Should parents allow it or not? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience. 73
- Many companies invest their money in sport games for advertisement purposes. Some people think it is good for the sport world, while others believe that it has some disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Some people think that managers alone should make decisions in the company, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 46
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... explore the rationale for both beliefs as well as proffer my own rationale for a viewpoin...
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Suggestion:
...tionale for a viewpoint on this matter. Regarding those who feel that investing ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...olve in to some other kind of business. Nevertheless, I cannot hold the opinion ...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...not hold the opinion in good conscience because of the fact that individual who got sponsor become motiv...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...of many companies team those are always consider underdog are now the biggest winners. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6426619464 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541353383459 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.195763242 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.181818182 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281474461102 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109825146314 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606374064579 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169105793703 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643535432987 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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