Many companies sponser sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think this is a good for the world of spory, while others think it is negative. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
With the view of achiving soaring production sales, marketing is of pivotal element and each companies will decide their own distinctive strategies to attract consumers. Many of them resort to sponsering sport activities as a way of advertising. Some people think it is beneficial to the world of sport meanwhile others hold the opposite notion.
On the one hand, money invested in sport is gigantic given that costs spent on salaries for coaches, athletes, players alone is humungous, not to mention expenditure on upgrading equipments, bulding new facilities for competitions. I can cite football to validate this point. A monthly salary of top-star players in predigious club like Barcelona or Manchester City can reach thousands dollars. However, all those aforementioned money is beyond the capacity of their budget. Therefore, they will need wealth sponserss who are organizations wanting fame. This is a mutual advantage. Entities via sports can put their name on the map while sport world thanks to enterprise's investment money can tackle with financial problems to enhance its quality thus bring athletes to the edge of their abilty. Whereby offering spectators, viewera the most nerve-wracking and intense games. To illustrate, in pre-olympic era, Coca is known to only America but after being the longest standing partners of Olympic movements, the brand has become household. Nowadays, scarcely does any stores have a coke-free department.
On the other hand, skeptics have sounding reasom to bear witness to their point. Obviously enough, companies ask famous players to take their role in publicizing campaign or acting in advertisements. This somehow can interfere with their sport career given that being involved in those activities will ultimately take up crucial training hours. Besides, hardly can anyone resist the lime light or public sensation. This resembles a fire attracting ephemera. The more beautiful and splendid, the more deadly. If players let themselves be obscured, they will eventually lose both games. Consequently, ony sports world is exposed to damage, only it loses inborn talent.
From my own perspective, not only is sponsoring advantageous to sport but it also play an imperative role in sustaining that world. Nevertheless, managers should priotize athlete's career regarless of colossal profits from advertise contract.
In conclusion, sponsoring comes withs its pros and cons and sports executives should make prudent decision to make the best of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2122.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51168831169 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9214417778 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65974025974 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.452631263 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4166666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0416666667 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04166666667 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197555941472 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04691770596 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576776910753 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106528353055 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866679147014 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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