Many companies sponsor for the sports to advertise their brand. Some people think that is beneficial for the world of sports. Discuss both views.
Sports are invested money from many companies which intend to propagate their brand. While it is thought that there are many benefits just only for the world of sports.
On the one hand, advertising the brands through subsidizing sports takes many merits for the companies. First, sports are famous around the world and easy to catch the attention of people. By dint of existing for a long time, sports are known by people in all the countries. Moreover, everyone loves sport and some sports have a huge fandom such as soccer, basketball, baseball. Therefore, advertising the brands through famous sports can easily well-known and become a worldwide trend. Second, many sports are suitable with the slogan of the companies. For example, “Write the future” is the slogan of Nike. These slogans feature some of the biggest soccer stars of today, namely Ribery, Rooney, Ronaldo, and Robinho. They look like statues because they all can write history. As a result, many people want to be like them by spending their money on clothes that famous sports stars represent for the brands. From this spending, companies will earn more profits.
On the other hand, there are many benefits for the world of sports. With sponsors from many companies could have a lot of money to allocate for something. For instance, the salary of the athletes will increase and some sports facilities will be improved. Furthermore, some sports games will be created to make a fund to help other people like the poverty, the immigrant, the help for cancerous patients.
In conclusion, investing money in sports to present the company’s brand has many advantages for the world of sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07246376812 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47300060434 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528985507246 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3367444097 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.7777777778 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.499855099599 0.244688304435 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162064468126 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834601767903 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.338771754842 0.151304729494 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272430194163 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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