many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development, but some important values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantage of economic development outweigh the disadvantage ?
In 21st century the race between the countries’s for economic development is going on. The race does not care about the loss of value which is inside the country or towards the other country. But today people do not care about the value because it gives more prestigious standard of living in their country. I personally agree with that statement that “advantages of economic development are more important”. I discuss more about in below paragraph.
On one hand, the economy not only helps in living standards but also important in shows the power of country. For standard of living in any country attract people towards for batter future. If the country was developed then it's easy for people to become entrepreneur because law of that country is easy for business. If the country is economically stronger than those people who do not able work after chronology age the government gives them enough pensions for lives high standard. In the economically developed county people look towards as joyfully.
However, any country depends on economy because it's deciding the budget of that country which helps the country and its people. For example last year ‘Singapore’ budget was high and government decided to distribute excess money to their peoples.
On other hand, If the country believe in blind development of economy then the effect shown on increase in tax system and ill effect on their country's peoples.
In my opinion there is more benefit on improving the economy of the country which leads the country towards becoming superpower and improve the living standards of that country.The blind development brigs ill effect and loss in some country's important value. It all depend on country and they leader that how they lead and take action for economy development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18771331058 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87885526942 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491467576792 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6435561566 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285305514545 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103520035847 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563575431003 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156454581983 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625594425937 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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