In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The crime section has been a growing trend in many parts of the world recently. Although there are conflicting views toward this increasing trend, societies can implement methods to mitigate those potential problems.
According to many criminal surveys of the authority, the increasing crime rate can result from at least two causes. First, the lack of awareness and knowledge about legislation and mental value might be one of the factors behind rising crime rates in many nations. When it comes to laws, it is argued that law should not be strict enough for all people to obey, so many people with a belief in being pardoned are willing to break the law and commit crimes in society. In addition, the tendency of violent and criminal films to create a model of a prisoner as a savior could negatively affect ethical values, especially on children. Second, poverty would be the root of all things including increasing crime in the community. For example, unemployees in the Covid-19 pandemic face a financial shortage. Unless they can receive any supply, they would tend to become a thief, a pickpocket, or even a robber because of their difficult condition.
Some simple methods should be implemented to deal with these root causes of increasing crimes. Raising inhabitants’ awareness plays a crucial role, which would lead to a decrease in the crime rate in the community. The government should educate pupils about ethical values and humanitarianism as soon as possible. Legislations, as well as laws towards films, should be considered more carefully and strictly. Besides, poverty reduction policies should be widely enhanced such as expanding job centers and social aids. Without any doubt, there should be a method to prevent the spread of coronavirus. As a result, every nation would come back to their roads.
In conclusion, poverty and unawareness are the main elements causing the increasing rate of crime. However, the government should take care of not only improving citizens’ economic conditions but also creating chances to approve knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21321321321 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78406074601 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0226117435 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4444444444 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186712085351 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575464813548 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571424313531 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111769972846 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344300670143 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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