Art galleries have been important through of history, people can appreciate all kind of paintings, scultures in these places. However, in this century people visiting art galleries has fallen. In this esssay I am going to explain the reasons and give some posibble solutions.
One of the main reasons, is technology has invaded all spots around the world so people are become distracted. For example, people can watch art in the computer, on the mobile phone and also, they can visit some private art websites.
An another reason, is that communities are more engage in social medium so they spent a lot of time putting post is facebook. imstagram and twiteer amongs others.
Also, people are working many hours for try to get a good quality of life and when they get some spare time, the are really tired and prefer stay at home with their family. Besides, Art galleries do not have enought advertising as result people do not know where are these places and how they can enjoy and learn visiting them.
I Think that art galleries should look for strategies to promote the jobs done for the artists. For instance, the owner of the art galleries could invest some money in advertisements on television, radio and internet. Futhermore, they can do some publicity in schools trying to involve young students and their families in the art world, in this way it is possible to create some art culture in the population.
To sump up, art galleries have lost some public for many reasons however, they can take some measurements to solve the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, really, so, for example, for instance, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87969924812 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50190723789 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6608137541 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206943633882 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798194908186 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535295281683 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113102747524 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647463804063 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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