It has been argued that is an issue when teenagers are involved in different types of work.Some peaple claim that it might be useful in future worklife or make teenagers more responsible.Howewer I disagree with the given statement due to the fact that employers somtimes can decive or it might be harmful for their education.
To begin with,it is important to pay attention to the fact that children are not protected by a low.It is inititible that dishonest employers can use them in their proposes.Moreower,due to lock of experience employers can give them work which does not inquire special knowlege, such as diswashing or cleaning floors.Undoubtably,young peaple have no chance to apply this skills in future.Futhmore,many employers pay less almount of wage for children in comparison with adults.Therefore it is argued that working in early age is not a good idea.
Another important reason is that children who have certain jobs may suffer from it because it have a devastation impact on their educational prosess.Work needs too much time and it is extreamly difficult to combine it with education.As a result,it can lead to fail of exams or poor progress in school.For example,in childhood when I used to moonlight at restaraunt ,i spent about 4-5hours every day.So that I had not enough time to for preparing for my exams.I strongly mean that teenagers should laungh on working when they approartate age.
To conclude ,without a doubt there are many disadvantages for children who work on arequtar basis, such as it takes to much time or inability to use the experience in future career.I strongly believe that children should not to work when they are young.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, for example, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12363636364 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36779889861 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.322271864 49.4020404114 262% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 352.25 106.682146367 330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.75 20.7667163134 331% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.0 7.06120827912 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158444836263 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101717840255 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427206170983 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101717840255 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427206170983 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.1 13.0946893788 283% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.46 50.2224549098 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.6 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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