In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while other consider it as valuable work experience, importing for learning and taking responsibility.
What are your opinion on this?
In some countries, many employers hire child labor. Some people believe that this is an opportunity for children to gain valuable work experience, others say that this should not be allowed. I agree with the later statement and my reason are below.
There are several reasons why I believe that it is inappropriate for children to entre workplace in such early ages. Firstly, it is dangerous for kids to work, especially when they have no ability to distinguish right from wrong. They may be exploited at work places and be mistreated by their employers. Moreover, some criminals may hire children to deliver illegal product, such as drugs, children will get involved in crime without knowing anything. To prevent these thing happening, we should not encourage kids to da paid work.
Another important reason is I do not believe children could gain any valuable experience from early employment. Most of the job for kids are repetitive or manual work, for example working in a factory or construction site. Children should focus learning and explore their study if they have to work for long hours, they will be distracted from class or even refuse to study. By the time they grow up, they may lack knowledge and will end up doing the same labor job for rest of their life.
To sum up, due to the reasons mentioned above, I disagree with the statement that encourage kids to do paid jobs will benefit them from development. I believe that this will prevent them from learning valuable skills and to pursue better life in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'these things'?
Suggestion: this thing; these things
...me without knowing anything. To prevent these thing happening, we should not encourage kids...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87072243346 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53885362571 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577946768061 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4470724766 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261812973376 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932538021321 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860159752701 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173424485708 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090464040472 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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