In many countries, government spent a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?
In many areas around the world, internet systems are given attention by investing considerably from authorities and factories. this essay will analyses a range of factors which contribute this fact and give opinion about whether it is value, logical.
it goes without saying that internet play an important role on society along with fast community development. The fact that human nowadays depends on internet deeply, thus, controlling internet impaction seems difficult - if not impossible. Not only it serves people with aims of searching knowledge or education improvement, but also it becomes a foundation that linking with other modern system conclude intelligent mobiphone, computer and television. if internet accession was not common in once country, many kind of creative productions would be useless. Therefore, internet development creates a favourable condition for inhabitants to access convenient life standard.
In addition, the influences of it on national sides are equally important, in particular international trade and economic productivity. Beside face-to-face organization between politicians, many countries may close relationship by contact through internet system such as video call, send rocket messengers. Furthermore, it is a vital part in produce which manages robots and mechanisms run in rules without employees. Unless the internet is control by lack of expenditures which spend on, a favour of economic sides will complete and affect positive on global.
In conclusion, governments try to consolidate internet technical by investing a huge number of money in a range of reasons. According to the benefits that can not denied, this use of national funds is necessary, or in same mean, it is certainly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68199233716 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11978718538 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685823754789 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2036130129 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.076923077 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138952279717 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449108673865 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475568726866 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791730746227 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045343414283 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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