With the development of society,on the other side of the coin with respective to the unsuccessful things like crime is also certainly increasing in many areas of the world.Governing bodies reacted to this problem and found many effective ways to arrest these issues.However, provided possible ways are only to some extent. Furthermore we need to go basics of this problem and assess the possible causes.
One of the major reasons recorded for increase in violence is media.As it is well-known that media influence changed lives significantly in both good and bad aspects respectively. Now-a-days there is a trend of blogging videos on you tube and film the live activities and post the videos irrespective to the content.By this type of broadcasting miscontent is becoming the reason behind to commit the violent crimes in public.
I believe that most of crimes are continue to rise, particularly in overpopulated areas and also increasing gap between rich and poor.We live in a society where money and possessions are given much value.Firstly, each individual should feel they have their own stake in the society this can be ensured by providing more workplace in-spite of their economic status.Personal circumstances is also one of the major reason for illegal activities to take place. For example, in recent days most of the crimes are of this category.Some individual are forced to take what they do not have actually meant to do such criminals need to be rehabilitated and personal counselings to be given.
Solving these problems is not easy. We can try to insight the relevant addressing causes and can reduce to greater extent. We can do this through education and by making sure that they are able to work.valuing human life and treating each individual with great respect can also put an end to some extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10231023102 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01833902055 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57095709571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.710523833 49.4020404114 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.777777778 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6666666667 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253212127332 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866919856195 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577254140975 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130282972716 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344599522079 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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