It is a fact that the younger generation, nowadays, migrates to various places for better education or employment opportunity. However, this phenomenon makes them stay away from the family until they are married. It seems that this trend has merits which might outweigh the demerits.
On the one hand, it is often said that the young generation migrates to various continents for study or work which might bring some advantages. Firstly, the standard education that students might obtain if they move away from their parents. For instance, annually, 20 million Indian young people travel Overseas to posses standard education. Secondly, a good career prospect might obtain once young people move to progress cities. To illustrate, Hyderabad, Bangalore, and New Delhi are the Metropolitan cities in India which provide lucrative jobs; hence, most of the job aspirants in countryside India, travel to these kinds of cities. Last but not the least, due to migration for various purposes to new places might lead young people to explore different cultures, thus, broad practical experience that the youth get. To exemplify, Trivandrum, India, is the best place for diverse cultural people.
On the other hand, even though this trend has enormous benefits, there are a few drawbacks. The first disadvantage might be that family bonding is disturbed if children prolonged time stay outside. To specify, Tamil Nadu state, India is the best example that most of the families in this jurisdiction suffer immensely due to lack of love and affection with their children because these children stay in Malaysia for the past several years. Moreover, children might forget the family’s tradition and culture if a long time stays away from the family. Therefore, migration to other places might disturb family bonding.
In conclusion, it is true that nowadays, most of the youth migrate to various reasons for study or work. This trend brings not only a few drawbacks such as family bonding disturbance and forgetting family tradition, but also some benefits like the standard education as well as a good career prospect. Indeed, this trend brings more advantages than disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32658959538 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66475399041 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557803468208 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2804260782 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.388888889 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4444444444 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174499910523 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597699088231 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449406022469 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116529942598 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292719366281 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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