It is true that in this competitive world, everyone has to do something to earn money for living. However, many people perform their duties to increase their finance without seeking any further rewards. Nevertheless, I believe there are feasible concerns needed to be taken while selecting the desired employment, including financial gains and stress-free work.
To begin with, it is often said that people need to rise their finance to live in this advanced world. So, job aspirants have to opt the respectable jobs, which should be suitable for their education; hence, employee's wages soar based on their experience. With this strategy, workers do their duties interestingly, and it leads to productivity increment of the organisation. For instance, in the USA, prominent companies offer jobs based on applicants' educational qualification to fit in the working environment, which lead to financial growth for the employees and industries. Many people are earning enormous salaries to lead a life in this modern era.
Moreover, the employees who not only have to earn huge wages but also should ensure job satisfaction. Money cannot replace anything, so, people have to lead a comfortable life, while earning money. For instance, in India, the Google company provides better amenities for their employees such as entertainment through conducting functions at weekends, sports, swimming, and annual trips to various destinations; thus, the Google company workers lead a stress-free life as everyone knows, so, achieving a job in this organisation is a highly competitive. Therefore, to lead a comfortable life, people should be obtained from several other rewards along with wages.
In conclusion, however, I believe that the job which increases not only finance but also job satisfaction should be there for employees.
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
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- Industrial pollution is increasing all around the world Some people say that the most effective way to tackle the problem is to Tax companies that are causing the pollution Others argue that there are other ways to control the situation Discuss both views 50
- Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while others believe a bicycle is a better way Discuss both views and give your opinion 86
- Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this can not be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4628975265 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98462558142 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572438162544 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0441112071 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293802351317 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108840245467 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466337258158 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188692055486 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137186188451 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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