In many countries, people are getting married later in life and taking children. Explain the reasons and give some solutions.
Men and women are waiting longer and making decisions to have babies much later, which has become a burning issue these days. I feel that our economic, educational, and social factors play a vital role in this regard.
The main reason for not marrying early is that people are becoming more career-oriented, being economically established in life. Mental pressure created by our parents and society accompanied by personal goals to get a splendid job, no wonder, this has resulted in stress, frustration, and demoralization lead to shunning marriage and adopting adolescents at an early age. Another factor that demands immediate consideration is the education system. To complete the graduation degree/program, it takes additional years on account of session complications, and the curriculum system is not up to the mark to generate qualified workers out-turns late marriage. More importantly, the new generation has the predisposition for getting married to a coeval partner owing to maturity and mutual understanding. As a result, women find tribulation while conceiving juveniles.
However, we need to curb this situation by redesigning curriculum patterns, facile borrowings, and psychic support. Firstly, education experts need to collaborate with teachers to plan the curriculum properly so that students do not face any session complexity and can complete their graduation on time as competent personnel/employees. Besides, parents should lower their expectations towards their children and stimulate them to become more successful in life. Finally, banks should offer easy loans among fresh graduates to make them self-sufficient and achieve their goals.
In conclusion, although modern people are reluctant to matrimony and having a child earlier, these problems are not insurmountable. In my view, we should tackle these issues, and we should begin by considering some of the solutions proposed above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 211, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70833333333 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27804075864 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677083333333 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9800381102 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120986912283 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343317760889 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449951228815 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568002516764 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382403910562 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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