in many countries , people are now living longer than ever before. some people say an ageing population creates governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
There are many old people in the world that we know about them , there are two theories about them , some people believed that age growth in community is a serious problem, on the other hand people idea that we need to experience the elderly people. I disagree with ageing population.
Firstly ,when many people are young age so, the government and ministry of education can plan for them ,this plan has help a country and they can learn necessary skills . on the other hand , a dynamic society needs many children that were born regularly. So, they will grow in a correct education system.
Secondly , Every country require to scientist produce for continuing industry, medicine process , army and other scientists. The young population can help to promote surface quality life. The government raise sharply cost for serving in society . thus this young can create most invention and discover other science .
Thirdly, Every country has had many young society can create power army for defending of their country . so , the government support from all families for production child and cover them . one of reason encourage families are that pay loan for buying house and cars and reduce tax for a child . In the European countries cost of treatment is free for big family because they help to plan their government.
In conclusion, I think that having a young society can help to grow abilities country and they will develop all needs of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46906211189 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560165975104 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.67057492 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0714285714 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238207538195 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720574110094 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723857873059 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133783579118 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824343125456 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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