In many countries, people now wear Western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than traditional clothing. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?
A prevailing trend of modern societies is the dominance of Western garment over traditional ones, with conflicting views on whether it is favorable or not. One opinion claims that western outfits appeal to millennials or even the members of previous generations due to their materials and appearance.
Advocates of this believe that the high-quality fabric of jeans and chinos, accompanied by the timeless looks, means that these items of clothing can be worn on various occasions. If a young adult wants to have a night out, he or she can put on a good pair of denim jeans or even khaki pants and still feel comfortable as well as fashionable. The variety of wash, color, and cut also permit a considerable degree of flexibility, which ensures wide availability of designs to choose from.
However, there are points of view that express the underlying downsides of this tendency. Although wedding suits and bridal gown can serve as formal attire for marriage ceremonies, traditional outfits for such occasion can fade into oblivion as a result. For instance, Vietnamese newlyweds often opt for black and white wedding event instead of the old traditional one that involves red for the bride and blue for the groom.
From a personal perspective, both western clothing and native clothing can exist side-by-side to offer the best options for the preference of the wearers. Not every one of any nations will choose to have their wedding to be suit-and-tie. Besides, people who do not follow fashion trends are free to choose whatever they like, whether it is local or western, and those who are into the image that western suits project are free to wear them as well.
In conclusion, western garments attract worldwide attention because of not only the quality but also the impression they leave. I believe this does not mean the death of local cultures but rather the growth of cultural diversity.
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Suggestion: belief
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... on various occasions. If a young adult wants to have a night out, he or she can put ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, so, still, well, as for, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04731861199 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72894548653 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618296529968 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2497429593 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136339783304 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043200589056 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297435451486 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689888918951 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214701671207 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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