The school education is always a main concern of society. However, the problematic behavior of students seems could not be solved properly. This essay will discuss the reasons of the issues and some suggestions to address them.
The first reason is family education. Family is playing a vital role in building the personality of the youth. A good character is formed among good atmosphere while the the behavioral issue is caused by the bad influence in contrast. Domestic violence could lead teenagers to behave aggressively since it is the way they learned to solve problems. Meanwhile students who are spoiled could become wayward hence concern themself only. Secondly, the external influences are associated with behavioral problems as well. For instance, the TV shows or video games which contain violent or sexual contents will potentially affect the behavior of students. Due to their weak ability of self control and lack of awareness of the legal liability, they are likely to imitate in reality without consider the consequences.
In order to reduce the impacts, some solutions could be taken. First of all, parents and schools should pay more attention on the mental health of adolescents.A better understanding of their views could be achieved by a friendly and fair communication, which will prevent behavioural issues fundamentally. Last but not least, some unhealthy website should be prohibited for under 18, which requires the power of the governments to create a green environment of internet. The basic knowledge of the law should also be broadcast by social media.
In conclusion, the severe problems with student behavior are exited because of the defect of the manner of education. Therefore, more efforts should be taken to establish a mutual respected world for teenagers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31468531469 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85716329118 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629370629371 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2190072934 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4117647059 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0950723887066 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301798846313 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380837999962 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652851155475 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269122678424 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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