Many countries spend a lot of money in the arts. Some people think investment in the arts is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether the funding of government should spend on arts or public services and facilities.While some people disagree with the idea of government invests money to arts ,I believe that the majority of money should be spent on public services and the smaller proportion of funds needs to be allocated to arts.
Some art projects definitely require help from the government.Firstly,some brilliant art forms,such as sculptures and paintings,revoke the shared emotions of the public by representing the culture,heritage and history of the whole country from different perspectives.Without these charming art forms,our countries may seem much less interesting and attractive.Secondly,some of these arts attract millions of tourists from all over the world and these arts function as landmarks or talking points to educate foreigners about the country.Governments should be happy to subside important art forms which can contribute to the economy of the host country.
On the other hand,I can totally understand the arguments against government funding for arts.The main reason for this view is that governments have more urgent concerns.For example,they have the responsibility to use the budget to finance the public facilities and necessary equipment which can completely benefit the whole society.Public services such as education,healthcare and infrastructure are all vital for a country to function properly.If these issues can not be addressed effectively,the work of arts may seem like a luxury.Consequently,government may give the priority of funding to the public service to meet the needs of the majority of people.
In conclusion,the are good reasons why art projects should be paid attention to,but in my opinion public services and facilities are also fundamental requirements that should be supported by funds firstly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76534296029 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.02076288355 2.80592935109 143% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5559566787 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.799390243 49.4020404114 398% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 399.25 106.682146367 374% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.25 20.7667163134 333% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 37.0 7.06120827912 524% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225564397812 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144756137627 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977100187908 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144756137627 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977100187908 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.4 13.0946893788 309% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.48 50.2224549098 -31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.6 11.3001002004 288% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.37 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.33 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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