In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
In recent years, it has been far more normal people to live alone or live in a nuclear family, especially those who live in big cities. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative effects that I will examine in this essay.
On the one hand, people living in a small family or living alone have several advantages. Firstly, individuals choose to live for their own life may become more independent and responsible for their selves. For example, a young adult will have to learn how to cook, how to earn and save money to pay all the house bills, which are valuable skills for their life. Secondly, deciding to live in a small family means that people can have more freedom in doing what they want without disturbing other family members. For instance, children enjoy listening to loud music or dancing in their rooms and they do not worry about their grandparents whether they like it or not because of living in a nuclear family. Last but not least, parents can spend more time taking care of their child as they are close-knit together.
On the other hand, this trend I have given above can cause negative angles. Initially, feelings are considered to be one of the most detrimental factors when living by themselves. Due to isolating from a family, they are able to experience loneliness, depression, and anxiety. people can capable of missing out the daily conversation and feeling the house bills are overweighed that sometimes they cannot handle it. By contrast, people, who do not stay in an extended family, usually tend to become an indolent person. this is because they lack the encouragement of other members. Moreover, a human living in a small family sometimes is unable to find common voices, share the same interests, and communicate his/her stories to siblings, which make them feel confined by their own family.
In conclusion, nowadays, people tend to live in a nuclear family or live alone causing both negative and positive effects that I mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90615835777 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53737382441 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551319648094 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5956603778 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233930587713 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857994851257 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909124936832 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180265014724 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598131794594 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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