In many countries today people in cities either live alone or in small family units rather than in large extended family groups Is this a positive or negative trend
Nowadays, society has developed rapidly and many people in cities prefer living individually or in small families to living with their parents and grandparents. I believe this is a positive trend. Firstly, this essay will discuss, living alone can help people develop themselves. Secondly, it will discuss the positive changes and improvements in the mental health of adults.
First, living alone changes young people to be mature, responsible adults. They can improve many soft skills which can not be practiced while living with large or extended families. According to a survey conducted by the University of Economics Ho Chi Minh City, 80% of the students faced a lot of difficulties when they moved out of their parent's homes. It's due to their dependence on their parents. For instance, a mother can train a child in survival skills such as cooking skills or going groceries, etc and these skills can be developed well just when living alone.
Second, people can develop their unique individuality. Most adults usually just take care of their physical health, not mental health. When living individually, they have a space to relax and look at themselves, their soul. It helps people to know themselves, and have self-assuredness. For instance, many studies of Yale University suggest that people taking care of themselves have good mental health and work more efficiently. This lifestyle is more and more popular, which is favored by the young.
In summary, in my view, there are many more positive elements than negative, as there are clear benefits to individuals living alone or in small family units. So, those living away from large groups can develop survival skills ad take care of their mental health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in summary, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20229007634 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69855965829 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8152827785 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1764705882 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231459045955 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079125996268 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826576774199 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167392246901 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106195788929 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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