Nowadays according to some surveys, there is a trend that an increasing number of people choose to live in a small nuclear families which normally include parents and kids.
From where I stand, the causes that lead to this phenomenon are as followings. Firstly, it is the first priority for a surging increase of young people to pursue work and life in cities while their parents still want to smaller cities or countrysides to live. Secondly, with the fast development of society, values and lifestyles differentiate between the youth and the old. It is a better choice to live separately so they won’t argue a lot in daily life. Thirdly, we are living in an aging society. With the better care and advanced equipments for the old, they can enjoy life in a way which they are fond of.
This trend has been causing some problems that attract people’s attention. From one hand, to some degree, family estrangement is arising especially the relationships between grandparents and their grandsons because of fewer connections. On the other hand,more and more older people are surrounded by loneliness.
Compared with the lifestyles between small nuclear families and extended families, I think it is a positive development to live in a small nuclear families. Firstly, people can choose the lifestyle that they like instead of sacrificing their life to families. Secondly, since we realized the generation alienation as distances and values, we can take actions to solve problems such as more visit and arranging more family activities.Last but not least, followed by incredibly houses prices, there will be less pressure for people when they live in a small nuclear families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, while, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15636363636 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8651545759 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570909090909 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4326312946 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204160711824 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693841954894 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577481969075 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129537762353 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365325782512 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.