In this contemporary era, there are numerous nations in the world which take international junk food instead of traditional food. It shows a bad impact on both families as well as societies. I agree with this notion and in this essay I will give valid reasons to substantiate the same in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are several reasons that why it is a negative effect. First and Foremost, future generation will not know about their traditional cuisines. To explicate it, in the coming years if people eat maximum fast food and their parents also not have any know about how to cook their specialize dish in their culture then their children also forgot about their tradition.To epitome, a survey was conducted by the WHO(World health organization) in 2016 has revealed that 70% of children do not have any knowledge about their traditional food because even their parents also not have any idea about their elegant dish of their country.
Furthermore, by replacing traditional food with junk food also effects not the individuals health.Because fast food is a unhygienic food which effects on respiratory system. By eating too much packed food people faces stomach, obesity and heart issues. To exemplify, according to the doctors maximum percentage of teenagers facing health issues by taking too much junk food.
Nevertheless, it is a positive effect for families and societies. Because nowadays there are majority of persons who are working. Due to hectic schedule they do not have enough time to prepare food. If they replace traditional food with fast food then can save their precious time as well as also can focus on their things like spending quality time with their friends and families.
To recapitulate, I believe that replacing traditional food by fast food has a negative effect as it impacts not people health and individuals also forgot about their traditional dish of their country but their are some positive effects of this which persons can not ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09756097561 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71019952026 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493902439024 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.929468307 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.428571429 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292998997375 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117210458482 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878128544741 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203032074975 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689933559748 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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