In many countries, university students have to move to other cities to study. Do you think the benefits of living away from home while studying outweigh the disadvantages?
There is a school of thought that university students expect to be moved out to different cities for learning purposes in many nations, which more brings benefits of living away from home while studying than the negative effects. In my perspective, the advantages of experiencing a new life away from home for studying brought out by these developments outweigh the disadvantages.
Opponents of this trend argue that there are many negative aspects of living away from family, which causes lots of mild drawbacks later. Firstly, Students couldn’t take care of themselves as well as their family. In terms of living in a new area, they might encounter these challenges such as the nutrition of daily meals, house chores which occupy a great amount of time. In this case, they will waste a lot of study time so as to harm their academic performance. Moreover, they might face homesickness and loneliness while studying, which badly hurt introverted people. Specifically, students in their first year have a tendency to experience a sense of homesickness. As a result, they will get a lot of pressure from studying and new life surrounding them. Secondly, Without sufficient care encompassing observation, advice from parents, students might get into some troubles such as drug use, gambling and being unmotivated mentally…It will negatively affect their scores in criteria’s performance.
However, I believe that there are many benefits in taking the risk of challenges while living away from family, making a great experience for students. In many ways, students might get maturer over their studying time because they need to be independent while facing a lot of pressure and problems. In other words, they might encounter unexpected challenges which obligate them to deal with many mental states and pressures. Experiencing a new life also means that they will get less support from their family which undermines the reliance on their family. By againsting many difficulties, they could find the way to get better in many skills encompassing solving problems, communication ... .Furthermore, they might get a chance to explore the new culture from different places by relocating to a completely new living environment. They get many opportunities to learn in an exotic customary and traditional values so as to broaden their horizons and become more open-minded. Consequently, they are able to solve problems on their own, and enhance their knowledge.
In conclusion, the advantages of experiencing a new life away from home are beneficial to students in many ways, which undermine the negative aspects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2207.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3309178744 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99495487134 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512077294686 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7044212 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.157894737 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7894736842 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.31578947368 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263578032671 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894111846018 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821293876382 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202016983664 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973119871164 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...se, they will waste a lot of study time so as to harm their academic performance. Moreov...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 939, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...gambling and being unmotivated mentally…It will negatively affect their scores in ...
^^
Line 5, column 692, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...sing solving problems, communication ... .Furthermore, they might get a chance to ...
^^
Line 5, column 694, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ng solving problems, communication ... .Furthermore, they might get a chance to explore the...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 917, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...exotic customary and traditional values so as to broaden their horizons and become more ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2207.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3309178744 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99495487134 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512077294686 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7044212 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.157894737 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7894736842 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.31578947368 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263578032671 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894111846018 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821293876382 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202016983664 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973119871164 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.