In many countries weddings expensive compared to the Past. what is cause? is it positive development or negative?
It is indeed truth that marriages are becoming one of trend to showcase of prosperity of someone in many countries which is not present in Past. It seems to me that significant reason of these are to prove oneself better than other and financial status of mankind increase which according to me negative impact on society.
To begin with, Wedding are currently become occasion of spending extravagant money to exhibit richness to others. This means people are spending on necessary money on such as Pre wedding shoot and on decor also on a musical night. This rituals are are not present in the past which seems to trend like entertainment program rather than true meaning of merging of lovely people. Moreover, financial growth of middle class society also rise significantly without which not fesiable to spending too much money on wedding.
However, expenditure of hefty sums of money on such occasion lead to on an to word consequences in society.Firstly, people comes under health problems like peer pressure and anxiety.This makes them always worry about accumulating money for future's wedding function.Secondly, disparity between effluent class people and economical deprived people increased. Example can be seen in recent survey conducted by Times of India Renowned Indian newspaper, published articles on a traditional marriage function that 80 percentage of out of hundred parents always feel tension about their offspring's marriage marriage is which is not there in the past time, owning to this 52 percentage of families comes under the category of payout money more than half of their total lifespend.
In conclusion, marriages are occasion of gathering of two families rather than showing society with wealthness to someone which on want attention in our mind. If people understand the concept of simplicity than and than only true value of wedding is served to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25412541254 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8348701553 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.630900813 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.2 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0838593454252 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384128873356 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371777240731 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055209764927 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346979122973 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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