Many countries women no longer the need to get married. Some believe that this is Because women are able to earn their own income and there for do not require financial security. That marriage can. Bring to what extend do u agree?
The great marriages are partnership it can't be a great marriage without being a partnership.In the current time off technological advancement one of the most pressing concerns is regarding. the given topic assert that do the need of marriage is still exits or not? I completely agree with that statement and shall explore that some from various aspects in the following paragraph.
To start with education is the third eye of the man. but in old time there is no facility of education for women's basically women's is illiterate but in Now days the world is modernisation now days in the World education system is very developed so therefore every women's is well educated, however there are achieving the good job base own study and Earning the good salary. While therefore women's fulfil own needs own properly. Recently Surwey is conducted by Delhi University and explain the rate of educated women's 9 out of 10.so there for women not interested do the marriage because they are full fill own basic needs .
Apart from this, There are several reasons why? Women do not interesting in marriage? Because they are lot of issues are create after after the marriage like domestic violence dowry system and that issues are main causes of divorce it is proved by London University with the help of survey these issues are the main problem and main impact on the women.
As we have seen that, there are number of answers to this question. However, I tend to believe that is main reason for this reluctance is women self sefeshency but it not such desachter. That do they don't need to get Marriage.Is even good extent but they can leave tradition and care about matalility and emotions spot regarding thing. With the help of money we can not buy happiness, emotions and love.
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- The bar chart below shows the results of the survey conducted by personal department at a major company. The survey was the carried out on two groups of workers.those aged from 18 to 30 and those aged 45 to 60 and shows the factor affecting their work pe 67
- Many countries women no longer the need to get married. Some believe that this is Because women are able to earn their own income and there for do not require financial security. That marriage can. Bring to what extend do u agree? 78
- The bar chart below shows the results of the survey conducted by personal department at a major company. The survey was the carried out on two groups of workers.those aged from 18 to 30 and those aged 45 to 60 and shows the factor affecting their work pe 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, regarding, so, still, therefore, third, well, while, apart from, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79672131148 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5498846362 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.8243341164 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307053843726 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103950702598 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827833251777 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159297085587 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490904548839 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.