In many countries women's do not want to get married. Some people argued that it's because they want to earn income and need a financial security.
As compared to past decades, nowadays women's are no longer interested in getting married. some people argued that it's because they want to earn their own income and have a good financial security. In my opinion, I agree with this statement but there are also some factors involved with this issue which I discuss above.
Women's in present era have number of dreams and empowerment to fulfill their needs and wants. The requirements of growth and improvement in their life not only consist in terms of money but also to make herself independent and confident among their family members and as well in friends. Before marriage most of the women's today demands to acquire better source of wealth to live her life efficiently and give towards the standard of living with her partner. However, sometimes she is afraid to be tied down and feels like she is not getting enough freedom after marriage to do anything. To illustrate, she feels overburdened by responsibilities and may it involves the fear of not having capacity to survive in it. Many of women's got cheated and she had faced heartbreak, so no more she will be able to being again in a relationship because of losing faith in love and scared to confronted again in the same situation. Additionally, the divorce rate also increases in the different countries because of incompatibility, misunderstanding and lack of communication which comes under the major reason of not to get married in case of women's.
Another, the greed of power and authority and focusing on work life, short time for family and spouse can make disaster and disputes, and its hard time after marriage for resolving these things. The most important part of marriage is deep connection and love, which can't be found easily and people stays single for a long time.
To end this, I support this argument but there are few closely related facts come along with it, and probably this problem will be more likely to grow in the future. likely to grow in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67601374318 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602339181287 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1756179987 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.071428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177602702929 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602784233095 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104707077274 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102248094411 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120956426567 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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