There is no doubt in saying that youngster prefer to urban areas from countryside areas in order to get a standard of education and various forms of works. It has more advantages than disadvantages which i will explain in the upcoming contexts.
To embark upon, there are numerous reasons why more and more young people decide to have a migration to cities. First and foremost, as people move to cities, they find the quality education than their countryside areas because number of educational institutes in cities provide them number of opportunities related with exploration in academic. Which later assist them in getting well paid job. Secondly, due to having more opportunities in urban areas than rural areas regarding work, people take the decision to move. Additionaly, good salary packages are also influence to leave the countryside areas, where are hardly possibilities of range of work with certain benefits.
In terms of positive sides of staying in cities, nowadays the system of education in specifically rural areas is not much as per the future requirements, which help more to be with superior quality of education for children. Second one is that, good working opportunities alongwith extremely good plans of benefits in monetary make the mind of younger to secure themselves as a valued person in society.
The picture is not so rosy here, leaving the countryside areas just for the sake of better education and work. So that, migration, from rural to urban, is not a solution government has a responsibilty to take intitiatives making the countryside area is most approachable area by setting up more and more industries and institutions. Otherwise development of country will not be completely done.
In conclusion, considering the reasons of being moved to urban from rural areas, the number of opportunities related to educational institutes and job make the younger ones much alluring. This scenario has more advantages making the sensational career than disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Otherwise,
...e and more industries and institutions. Otherwise development of country will not be comp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30094043887 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00935214166 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548589341693 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9387437108 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.785714286 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159776163075 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597274679398 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377999149748 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916532023335 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251950310465 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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