Many criminals commit crimes after they were set free. Research indicates that the people who were convicted criminals would often commit crimes when they are set free.
cauase and solve this issue?
Research shows that unfortunately, many offender continue constantly to a commit a crime after their prison period. There are variety reasons for this event also, there are different ways for solution this problem. This essay will survey reasons for creating this happening and will give solution for reducing crime by offender.
Commit a crime by these individuals after freedom from prison have various reasons. Firstly, these individuals, usually will have a problem for finding job. Employers prefer employ healthy people for their company or work environment. Even in some countries, for example Iran, the factories refer individuals to the police offices to receive the certificate of no criminal record. For this reason, when offender cannot find a job and earn money, they become have to come back to wrongdoers. The second reason is the social conditions that are created for them. This is a fact that people have a pessimist sense about offender, and leave them, even in some cases, they lost their family as well as friends and became alone. As a result of this loneliness and hopeless, they returned to the crime.
Nevertheless, there are solutions that government and people can doing for decrease this event. For example, government should provide workshops for criminals in order to they can earn money. With doing this, their tendency to crime decrease gradually, and they can make a healthy life for themselves. Likewise, government can change people view about the convict through variety ways. For example, they can support of making films that offender became transform to a positive personality after freedom. As a consequence, individuals in society gradually will accept them more convenient among themselves.
To sum up, this is true that some offenders continue to commit a crime because of unemployment or rejection of society nonetheless, the governments can provide spaces for working them and earn money for reducing crime by them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun offender seems to be countable; consider using: 'many offenders'.
Suggestion: many offenders
Research shows that unfortunately, many offender continue constantly to a commit a crime...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, likewise, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, well, for example, as a result, as well as, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32268370607 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68563372121 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543130990415 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3192764542 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5555555556 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189344987708 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723594065946 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528469942478 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130000814993 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178702532082 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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