Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
It is often experienced that many incidents have taken place where after finishing their prison sentence many perpetrators again take same path and do further crimes. And government should take strict action to take this to end. This essay is intended to discuss why this type of phenomena happens and possible solution to solutions.
To commence with, criminals are in the jails, because we want to make this world crime free, but one day or another their punishment will be over and they will hit back similarly. Sometimes they do it again because of their mental illness or habitually or may be because of possession. However, there are some common and treatable reasons. Firstly, this happens because when they get out of the donjons as a normal human they have to find work for livings and to accomplish their needs, but because of spoiled reputation most of the time they do not be able to get job. And i think that could make that person to take that path again unwantedly.
Moreover, to get rid of this kind of issues taking action, while they are in the jail, can solve this problem to some extent. Likewise, giving them training for some minor labor work, when they are going through the period of imprisonment. Giving them little introspection training like for instance, in some Indian jails some time they arrange special type of life enhancement classes like personality development, moral values and meditation by Dharma Gurus to be a good member of society. Apart from that, government can give special status shows good work in donjons. Basically, they can sort them out in rankings by their work and clear their criminal record.
to conclude, to solve the problem of crime again by same criminals after bail. We have to change our thoughts about the person who just finished his statement, and accept them as a ordinary man. And by government giving them good and clear status they would be able to find jobs and will never think of coming that way again.
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- Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest? 73
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8211143695 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42573228586 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6026289284 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175959857213 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586745792573 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372037459577 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106627792493 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335668079793 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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