In the contemporary, there is a large number of developing countries currently expanding their tourist industries. This has brought many benefits but also caused several troubles. The essay below will outline the reasons for the case, thus its advantages and disadvantages.
To begin with, popularity around the world is the main reason many emerging countries are improving their tourism. Moreover, tourism is a major foreign revenue earner, which can be used for the development of the country. It can not only act as a means for improving and extending the physical infrastructure but also help increase awareness of a country in an international context.
Tourism both has positive and negative effects but I personally prefer far more advantages than disadvantages. Tourism creates employment for local people in services like accomodation, transport and entertainment, plus the transportation system. Subsequently, it attracts investment from multinational companies and helps to improve the living standards. The native will have the opportunity to introduce cultural tradition or unique cuisine. The tourist trade is vital for some economies, therefore, some areas rely on tourism for their income.
However, there are still some common problems that each country has to deal with and give out the appropriate solutions. Although tourism enhances the facilities and infrastructure, these can destroy the habitat of wildlife, which leads to the pollution of the natural environment. It puts pressure on local people because of a significant rise in the cost of living and goods, services or housing.
To sum up, developing tourism brings a variety of benefits for its own country, which is an irreplaceable responsibility the government must do so as to enhance the economy. Despite its disadvantages, we should join hands to bring out the solutions and prevent as least as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, as to, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50684931507 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18632868161 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633561643836 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4840863046 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199334193279 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620214817248 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977467837416 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116253057362 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116986501649 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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