tourism is being encouraged by a number of developing nations nowadays. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this approach of these nations as well as the reasons why this a positive development.
To begin with, tourism has been a huge source of income for the nations who are rich in natural beauty and resources for decades. These countries have developed a lot over these years. So, most of countries which are still in developing state want to take advantage of their natural resources to lift up their own economy due to this observation. For example, thousands of tourists visit Thailand every year which has caused a significant change in its economy. Tourism makes up a large part of their net gross national income. Moreover, tourism helps to introduce various cultures of a country around the globe as a lot of tourists from foreign countries visit the country. This also gives recognition to the local artists and help them earn their bread and butter. This is why many nations are trying to advertise their tourist spots to widen the scope of tourist industry.
Furthermore, this practice can be seen as a positive development. Local people can earn a lot due to increase in tourism and this can, in return, help the per capita income of the country to increase. This can make a huge difference in the economical growth rate of the country. Some of the developing countries are suffering from serious issues such as hunger and more. Increase in tourism can be a large source of earning money for these nations to check these issues. Moving further, there is a lot of prejudice regarding third world countries in people in the other parts of the world. Advertisement of the tourist places of these nations around the globe can help a lot to eradicate these stereotypes. So expansion in the tourist industries is indeed a positive development.
To recapitulate, the huge interest of developing countries in expanding their tourist industries is very beneficial on local as well as national scale.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Tourism
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... economical growth rate of the country. Some of the developing countries are suffering from...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, third, well, for example, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94705882353 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71236435886 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485294117647 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2571321501 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5263157895 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8947368421 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319615034019 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101610285712 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075437720646 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220209471955 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517637832999 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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