Many different countries have most shops and products as the same Some consider it a positive dvelopment whereas others consider it negative Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Nowadays, It is said that The custom and culture of the countries have been blended into the one due to the development of social media and cooperation of economy between them. It is reason that most shops and products appear in many different countries in the same way. This essay would discuss about this development in the positive and negative opinion.

Some people consider the growth of stores and goods in positivity. Firstly, the citizens could buy anything they want regardless of original from abroad. It is convenient that only by going to the shops, they are able to easily get the products. Secondly, The buyer could choose comfortably the different brands, various model and reasonable price from different countries around the world. Thirdly, this extension of sale channels through abroad help develop the economics in the internal region as well as promote the brand of one country to other country. For example, Apple covers the world with thousands of stores and the same quality of products.

Whereas there are some negative points about this matter. Firstly, the cultural identity of individual countries is faded. Example, It is easy for a Vietnamese to buy a LV bag in Vietnam although this brand is in French. Secondly, because of availability of various products, many people build up the habit of buying abroad goods, even never care about the domestic ones.

In conclusion, the development of shops and products has significant benefits. However, the negative effects are unavoidable. In my opinion, each people should be aware of the value of each products and balance the shopping habit so that leverage strengths and overcome limitations.

Votes
Average: 7.9 (13 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16911764706 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64696691017 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2940364694 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.875 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257681335054 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076140933797 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742812971679 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141694323286 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676842971781 0.056905535591 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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