Many elderly are no long looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays, the external-assisted way of nursing oldsters including retirement homes is a current preference for their relatives. There are several merits and demerits for this interesting issue which will be elaborated in the forthcoming paragraph.
On the one hand, to equip old people with eldercare services would bring an essential attribute for them. Not only elderly would be nursed carefully for what their fit dietary habit is but also how mental balance be controlled. Needless to say, many of family members lack life-saving skills in which this can jeopardise retired people's life. Furthermore, if such responsibility is assigned to their family members, this will arouse extra monthly expense. The fact that this had better eldercare organisation than in-home care owing to arranging the fixed amount of budget spent by aging parents.
On the flip side, this issue could bring drawback of private insurance which, perhaps, becomes the main objective of retirement home. Despite providing all of what the elderies need, increased costs might be listed from extra medical care to special room and so forth. It might be said that those parents could encouter mental issue, especially the feeling of loneliness. After productive days during the working age, part of oldster long for family togetherness in the rest of time. Indeed, the more family neglect their old relatives, the more disconsolate they will be.
To sum up, providing all the care for aging people in residential home brings several advantages including the skilled nursing facilities and low risks of excessive outcome. Meanwhile, the possibility of mistreatment and the worse mental health of the aging might be its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40298507463 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83476021012 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664179104478 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.7354958366 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.428571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227340356013 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069680890078 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544987571601 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133041054689 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285829120493 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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