A plethora of components are able to foster employees in the organization, but financial motivation is considered to be a paramount reason. From my perspective, I firmly disagree with this statement, as there are more pivotal factors. The job satisfaction as well as the recognition of the establishment are two other crucial elements.
First and foremost, the satisfaction and the fondness for the job are regarded to be the pre-eminent determinents, due to the fact that people find it is more intriguing and easier to do their favourite activity. Besides, this provide you with the enthusiasm which is able to assist to overcome the pressure, obstacles and to pursue their goals. To illustrate, a literature teacher in Vietnam named Thanh Hoai Thanh who has been dedicating herself to imparting knowledge to the students, always takes full responsibility for teaching no matter how drained she is. With numerous times she got serious ill or even had to get IV fluid, she still endeavoured to teach her online students. This happened because she loves teaching children and she regards it as her duty. As a result, satisfaction plays a vital role in making more attempt into performance.
Furthermore, the appreciation of organization is also viewed as a basic point. In the workplace, employees certainly have a desire to be an essential part of that establishment. They want to be recognized, appreciated and belonged to that organization. To clarify, a compliment of an accomplishment may tremendously boost an employee's self-assurance and contentment. Because that compliment means that you have done a great venture and the leaders, the fellow companions admit it. That's why you want to dedicate more, because of your responsibility and the faith from other collegues . Sometimes, a written letter of appreciation generates more motivation than a pile of money, which can view as the invisible power to enhance business achievement. Therefore, people forget about money when they are appreciated.
To summarize, money motivates a part of society to work. However, the other components such as gratification and the esteem also have the fundamental influence.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...eaders, the fellow companions admit it. Thats why you want to dedicate more, because ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ility and the faith from other collegues . Sometimes, a written letter of apprecia...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3023255814 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27658820204 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601744186047 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1292587925 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1052631579 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953562958746 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283049341653 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361632173342 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575149619702 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173212183577 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...eaders, the fellow companions admit it. Thats why you want to dedicate more, because ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ility and the faith from other collegues . Sometimes, a written letter of apprecia...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3023255814 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27658820204 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601744186047 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1292587925 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1052631579 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953562958746 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283049341653 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361632173342 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575149619702 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173212183577 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.