Many fathers today stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What are the causes of this? Is this a positive or a negative development?
In the past, a traditional perception accepted by numerous people is that the duties of woman are to look after her home and that of man is to go to work. Nevertheless, this insight gradually becomes no longer suitable in the modern time; that is, today, more and more females turn to breadwinners whilst their husbands doing the chores, caring for their children are stay-at-home fathers. In order to make clear the circumstance above, this essay will indicate some reasons as well as give the idea of whether this trend is beneficial or not.
The causes as follows explain why this tendency has happened these days. Apparently, one of the obvious facts is that there have been more and more opportunities for women to approach better educational settings, thereby assisting them in enhancing their own abilities and gaining success in their career path. Notably, in recent decades, it is not difficult to recognize many female persons achieving great achievements in diverse fields, or having important positions at famous corporations, especially being appointed as leaders of governments. Moreover, we have to agree that thanks to the development of technologies, a large amount of heavy manual work and household chores have been finished with the help of machines, whereby persons can save a plenty of working hours. Owing to this reason, mothers today are likely to have more time to invest in the workplace so as for supporting their families in terms of financial aspect.
My stance is that accounting for the practice mentioned, I am of the view that this tendency is an essential promotion in the developed society. This means that each person has the right to contribute to maintaining a content family by their own methods, regardless of different genders. The more persons having an open mind about the awareness of gender equality, the more individuals will have chances to explore their strength and weakness points so that they are able to choose tasks or roles appropriate for them. By doing this, people’s lives will grow more civilize, and effects stemming from respecting different situations in life as well as genders will continue bringing lots of merits because this is the era when citizens can utilize their capabilities via varied ways.
From what I have mentioned above, I can draw a conclusion that despite having many arguments with respect to the responsibilities of males and females to their families, I assume that this practice is referred to as switching the roles between parents when men become house husbands while women do the business is a positive expression of modern life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, as for, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2203.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11136890951 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.796798744 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598607888631 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0825764348 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.461538462 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1538461538 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28212683243 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947001605647 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481906658314 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167054587901 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541920635349 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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