many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more enviromentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
Many people like buying many foods, which is far away in online because these foods are strange and good-tasting. However, in term of safety, I srongly belive that eating foods cooked in local or home is economical and enviromental. This essay will argue that the benefits of eating local foods outweigh the drawbacks of it. The essay will demonstrate that eating local foods is economical anf hygiene safe, follwed by analysis of how the disadvantage, no diversity of local foods, is disappear.
The reason for eating local food is money- saving, which is suitable for people paid with low-salary. They don’t have to pay money for transport fee so they can save money to buy many kinds of food. Moreover, they can they can buy food anywhere when they feel hungry. Therefore, they don’t have to waste time on waiting food delivered to their home. Besides, they don’t worried about foods can be spoiled during transportation. As a case in point, a survey bu Han Dong University in Korea found that more than 83% of people living this country tend to eat local foods or have a meal at home. This survey also revealed that of 83% these people, there are more 60% of people preferring local foods because of economical.
On top of that hygiene safe is the main reason for eating local foods. They can ensure that the foods they eat are fresh and cooked hygienically. Besides, they can search the origin of foods. Moreover, the local foods are suitable for native people because they can’t eat foods that are cooked in different areas. As a result, eating local foods will avoid poisoning and digestive problems. To illustrate this point, a survey bu WHO showed that in 2019, there are more than 85% of poisoned people. Among them, there are 60% of food poisoning, 15% of blood poisoning anf 10% of other types of poisoning.
However, there are many people said that local foods were not diverse. They also said that local foods didn’t meet their demand so they have to buy foods in many part areas. This is a wrong opinion. The local foods always change to keep pace with national food or even world cuisine. There are many new dishes updated everday. And a special food in a areas is also cooked in many parts of the world. For example, pizza is a special food in Italia. However, this food is cooked in many countries around the world such as Vietnam, Japan, Korea,...Therefore, they can enjoy pizza no matter where they live.
In summary, eating local food is better than eating food shipped from far away. Eating local food is not only economical but also healthy. Therefore, we should eat local foods rather than buy foods from far away areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 486, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disappeared'.
Suggestion: disappeared
...antage, no diversity of local foods, is disappear. The reason for eating local food is ...
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Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'they can'.
Suggestion: they can
...ey to buy many kinds of food. Moreover, they can they can buy food anywhere when they feel hungry...
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Line 4, column 350, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... updated everday. And a special food in a areas is also cooked in many parts of t...
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Line 4, column 350, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a area' or simply 'areas'?
Suggestion: a area; areas
... updated everday. And a special food in a areas is also cooked in many parts of the wor...
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Line 4, column 542, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... the world such as Vietnam, Japan, Korea,...Therefore, they can enjoy pizza no mat...
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Line 4, column 546, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... world such as Vietnam, Japan, Korea,...Therefore, they can enjoy pizza no matter where t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in summary, such as, as a result, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2207.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 464.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75646551724 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38595301962 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456896551724 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4053614161 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1034482759 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10344827586 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361423408905 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13033048136 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875441211541 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264862336064 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865441439565 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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