With the advanced breakthrough of global industrialisation, a massive number of governments believe that the most important and reasonable accomplishment for their countries is to enhance the domestic economy. Meanwhile, a group of people have equal regard for both economic and other types of progress. Personally, I do believe that maintaining balance is much better than concentration.
On the one hand, lots of governments in the world have been focusing on economic purposes as they bring huge profits and honour to the nation. Firstly, it is obvious that the more dynamic economic activities held in a country, the more impoverished this region becomes. To be more specific, the Japanese government and other countries which possess a vast swath of seashore, have been implementing different kinds of policies on maritime economic development and also obtaining gigantic benefits from them. Secondly, a stable and dependent economy also bring prestige to the nation. Accordingly, the developed countries are more able to participate in various worldwide organisations as well as promote their reputation.
On the other hand, other people suppose it is essential for a country to balance other types of progress namely education, health services, culture and tradition, etc. It will be turmoil if the government only concentrate on economic development, that is a giant gap between rich and poor, an insufficiency in literacy and the degradation in the average public well-being. In addition, cultural and traditional preservation is essential to protect the wholeness of a nation, without that, the young generation could not define themselves as an ethnic or even a unity.
In conclusion, the different governments have a different opinion about whether to concentrate sorely on the economy or to balance other development. To me, I am inclined to choose the second one, a better choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43389830508 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20674382751 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5215490529 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.307692308 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195404995294 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651776838362 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882609799866 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116628346875 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826769195591 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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