Many governments think that economic progress is most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress and equally important for a country.
In this era of competition world the main focus of every nation is grow more and more. Presently, many administrator think that economic progress is essential for a country. By contrast, others think that other progress also imperative. Here, I would like to account both the view points with my own perception.
There are manifold points to support the former view, First and foremost, economic growth play phenomenal role to uplift the standard of nation's people. To illustrate, government can enhance the salary of working employees if they have hefty amount of money. Apart from it, in thriving nation, people can take much relief from tax side department as government put less tax on public due to the economic growth and the price of domestic things automatically reduce.Therefore, masses can imagine a better life under the economic growth of a country.
Numerous points can be mentioned in the latter view. A country with healthy and educated people can progress by leaps and bounds.For example, people who are physically fit and well educated will automatically contribute in economic progress of a nation. Thus, healthy and educated people are most important rather than money.
To recuperate, Undeniably, economic growth of a country help people in every field. However, still I believe that money is not important compare to health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
In this era of competition world the main focus of every nation is grow more and more. ...
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Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...world the main focus of every nation is grow more and more. Presently, many administ...
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Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun administrator seems to be countable; consider using: 'many administrators'.
Suggestion: many administrators
...ation is grow more and more. Presently, many administrator think that economic progress is essenti...
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Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...of domestic things automatically reduce.Therefore, masses can imagine a better life under...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...people can progress by leaps and bounds.For example, people who are physically fit ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24423963134 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8180241601 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63133640553 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9620020775 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270615554351 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100152195734 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112257797687 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150440888685 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702878267424 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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